poetry to die for - (but then i have very low standards)
ok....
well i've hit 5,000 pv's - which is nice
and my last 4 poems i like a lot
we start with a gentle observation poem called'city observations' which focused on a group of people i met
then in'erstwhile' we move onto a specific look into one of the stories i was told, about an old man who plays his jazz late at night and wakes the baby
the baby in 'newborn' having awoken crys and now we have the third poem which is about that particular type of agony
lastly, or most recently should i say 'garden' is based on a view i had of a couple in a garden last summer, i think i did quite well on this one
there we are, an't i doing well, i think i'll work them into my uni coursework